Sunday, September 1, 2013

The experiment part 2


Well I have gotten my edited manuscript back from First Editing http://www.firstediting.com/ this week. Now I need to sit myself down and go through the changes that the editor has made to see if I agree with all of them. I have learned the hard way, in the past, just because someone is a professional editor that does not mean that they do not make mistakes. After I have gone through all the track changes and accepted those that I like and rejected those that I disagree with I will then send it out to some of my friends whose opinion I trust to get more feed back. I always want my stories to be the best that they can be.

I could send my story to fifteen different people/editors and I could get back fifteen different versions. But I ultimately need to stay true to my voice, my vision, and myself. Here is a great example of what I mean. This is part of a note that I received from my editor:

What an absolutely delightful story! I'm so glad I was chosen as your editor.
I changed a few words to American English per your request. One that comes to mind is 'gob-smacked', which I know from watching BBC America, but is changed to 'flabbergasted' here in the U.S.
I hope to see more of Spencer's adventures soon!”

I really want it to say ‘gob-smacked’ so that is one change that I will be rejecting. It’s not wrong it’s just what I want. I need to get to work now.

Good luck, and keep writing!

Morgan


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